5 SENTENCES (INEFFECTIVE PARAGRAPH)

Seeing a classic wooden old skool table and chair set puts me on my school.
Reading a book, given a homework, and converting the table into a pillow if it is really needed, it is school.
From 24 hours of a day, yes, 10 hours was spent in school, but it is just 10 hours.
14 hours of my day could be used for something else, maybe unconnected to school things.
Sleep deprivation, you're my enemy and i will banish you!

5 KALIMAT (PARAGRAF NON EFEKTIF)

Ngeliat meja kayu klasik ditemani kursi kayu goyang-goyang bunyi ngiik-ngik itu jelas di sekolah.
Buka buku, dikasih tugas, kalo ngantuk berat tidur telungkup di meja, itulah sekolahku.
Dari 24 jam waktu memang 10 jam di sekolah, tapi kan itu baru 10 jam.
14 jam hari bisa dipake buat hal lain, mungkin gak berhubung ama sekolah.
Deprivasi tidur, oh itu musuhku, dan kan kukalahkan!